Thursday 22 May 2008

Don't Spoil Adult Friend Finder Profile!

Guys make all sorts of mistakes when writing their own profiles. Stupid mistakes which are incredibly easy to detect and avoid, but they get made every day by most guys. Women read these profiles and assess who they are by what you write. But these blunders get repeated over and over again, sinking most guys like torpedoed boats. That’s alright because it gives guys like you and me a much better chance to Max Adult Finder.

So here’s the beginning of what to look out for. Read this list, then go check our own profile.

By the way, there’s plenty more here on this blog to guarantee your success!

Don’t misspell

Dude, use your spell-check, stick your text in Word and spell-check. Are you a computer idiot? Use a dictionary. Women hate it when men misspell. It shows sloppiness, an inattention to detail. And women like attention to detail - just consider their interest for things like decoration and foreplay. Get it? The two words I see misspelled most often - “independent” and “definitely”.

Avoid clichés

You are not a “hopeless romantic”, a “laid-back guy”, or “just out looking for fun”. Please. It’s been done. stop it already!

Avoid general, generic language


You don’t like walks on the beach, a nice wine with dinner, feel comfortable in jeans and t shirt. Dude - go read some guy sites
and see how often men write the same thing. They are clueless. More importantly, to an attractive woman online, they are the same as all the other… invisible. Instead, be vivid, sensual and suggestive in your details.

Be precise in your language

Say “Chicago Blues” - which is better than “blues”. “Shiraz” is better than “wine”. The Palms is better than “Vegas.” Ribeye steak is better than just steak. Azure is better than blue. Aspen grove is better than forest. The more precisely you can paint the environment of your life, the more tactilely and sensually her imagination will project her into it.

Be dynamic in your language

That means active verbs. Verbs that pack power, action, movement. Avoid static words like “is” “are” and “have” - those are static
verbs. Use dynamic verbs - USE A THESAURUS to make your sentences sizzle, but be careful that you actually know what the words mean before actualy using them. If not you’ll be making them laugh for the wrong reason.

Show, Don’t Tell

Possibly the most important writing rule of all. Don’t list. Don’t talk about. Don’t tell about yourself. Show yourself. If you’re funny, don’t say you’re funny - be funny. If you love your little nephew don’t (cliché) say he’s the “light of my life” - paint a picture of something you and he do together or how he makes you laugh. Show your life, don’t describe it. Write little movie scenes in your profile. She will be drawn into that movie.


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